tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4583758561446276050.post376081393563830957..comments2014-04-17T09:51:12.574-07:00Comments on The Mae Project: Lesson 4: Over The Top Makes A Book FlopLori Folkmanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12707165102926821045noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4583758561446276050.post-15554299664759608402013-05-29T09:41:44.130-07:002013-05-29T09:41:44.130-07:00A certain teenager at my house CAN and WILL eat an...A certain teenager at my house CAN and WILL eat an entire package of Oreos in one sitting! And he's skinny! I want his metabolism. Funny how teachers in middle school and high school want MORE adjectives and now we have to untrain ourselves from that bad habit. I wonder what else they taught us that was wrong??? :)Lori Folkmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12707165102926821045noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4583758561446276050.post-49457457576933558262013-05-27T18:00:30.037-07:002013-05-27T18:00:30.037-07:00I recently read this advice somewhere else too--th...I recently read this advice somewhere else too--that of using adjectives sparingly, so thanks for fortifying that point for me. I like your depiction of eating a whole package of Oreos all at once. Gag! I'll be looking out for this pitfall in my writing. Thanks!Jennifer Lovellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00620872883706842592noreply@blogger.com